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		<title>Inception is an Exceptional Mindf**ck</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#8217;s been more than a week since I&#8217;ve seen Inception, and I still haven&#8217;t felt this mindf**ked since watching, well, Memento. Not surprisingly, those two movies share the same writer/director: Mr. Christopher Nolan. Inception is the reason why I watch movies. It&#8217;s the reason why I write screenplays. And it&#8217;s the reason why I feel [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s been more than a week since I&#8217;ve seen <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1375666/" target="_blank"><strong><em>Inception</em></strong></a>, and I still haven&#8217;t felt this mindf**ked since watching, well, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0209144/" target="_blank"><strong><em>Memento</em></strong></a>. Not surprisingly, those two movies share the same writer/director: Mr. <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0634240/" target="_blank"><strong>Christopher Nolan</strong></a>.</p>
<p><em>Inception </em>is the reason why I watch movies. It&#8217;s the reason why I write screenplays. And it&#8217;s the reason why I feel that cinema can be not only entertainment, but also a sophisticated (if expensive) expression of art.</p>
<p><em>Inception </em>is quite simply one of the best movies of the year.</p>
<p>On the surface, it&#8217;s a thriller. But it&#8217;s also an action movie, a crime caper, a psychological drama, a mystery, and a contemporary sci-fi flick.</p>
<p>An outstanding <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000138/" target="_blank">Leonardo DiCaprio</a> stars as Dom Cobb, who is a master of <strong>extraction </strong>&#8211; the crime of entering people&#8217;s dreams to steal valuable secrets. But his skills have also made him one of the most wanted men on the globe. His only path to redemption is to accept an offer from Japanese tycoon Saito (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0913822/" target="_blank">Ken Wantanbe</a>) to enter into the dream of a corporate rival &#8212; not to steal an idea, but rather to plant one.  This dangerous process is called <strong>inception</strong>, the act of planting an idea so deep into a mark&#8217;s subconsciousness that he will wake up believing the idea was his own and, therefore, more likely to act on it.</p>
<p>Most screenwriters would stop at the &#8220;stealing ideas in dream&#8221; premise and be pretty proud of themselves. But Nolan doesn&#8217;t settle for just “good;” he aims for brilliant, and pulls it off by adding the ingenious twist of inception.</p>
<p>Fortunately, <em>Inception</em>’s heady sci-fi themes are grounded by Cobb’s emotional character arc. His highly touted talents belie the fact that he’s actually estranged from his kids and wracked with guilt from holding a deadly secret about his wife.</p>
<p>In this way, <em>Inception </em>is a classic<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conflict_%28narrative%29" target="_blank"> man-vs.-himself conflict</a>, as much as it is a crime caper set in the mind. Without revealing any spoilers, I just have to say that this type of subgenre is usually handled pretty poorly (think <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0286716/" target="_blank"><em>The Hulk</em></a> or <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0780653/" target="_blank"><em>The Wolfman</em></a>), but Nolan makes Cobb&#8217;s internal battle pay off in spades.</p>
<p>Cobb’s characterization doesn’t come at the expense of the supporting characters, either. Nolan makes sure each of Cobb’s allies is given a little something to chew on. I could go on and on about Watanabe’s Saito or <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0362766/" target="_blank">Tom Hardy</a>’s Eames or <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0182839/" target="_blank">Marion Cotillard</a>’s Mal or, especially, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0330687/" target="_blank">Joseph Gordon-Levitt</a>’s Arthur &#8212; but I won’t. Suffice to say, every character brings his or her own intricate piece to the puzzle that is <em>Inception</em>. No wasted faces, no wasted words. Their dialogue rings true, with each person having his or her own cadence and rhythm.</p>
<p><em>Inception</em>’s screenplay does have one minor flaw, though: there are one too many flashbacks. Actually, they can’t be considered flashbacks; they&#8217;re Cobb’s subconscious projections based on his memories that pop up into various people’s dreams.</p>
<p>Um, yeah.</p>
<p>Kinda hard to explain without spoiling the magnificent subtleties. Just know that some of the scenes and images are repeated one too many times.</p>
<p>Audiences these days are so movie-savvy that a flashback (or pseudo-flashback in this case) only needs to be used once or twice to have them get the idea (no pun intended). More than that and it just gets redundant and slows down the pacing. At two and a half hours, <em>Inception </em>could probably endure some trimming and still retain much of its emotional and intelligent complexities.</p>
<p>I could write more about <em>Inception</em>’s cinematography, action, stunts, music, production design, and special effects, but I&#8217;d just be slathering on the same type of praise that I have been heaping on Nolan.</p>
<p>In today&#8217;s empty movie landscape of mindless remakes and retread sequels, Nolan has written something that is wildly unique, extremely creative, hyper intelligent, and most of all edge-of-your-seat exciting. If you haven&#8217;t seen <em>Inception </em>yet, just know that you&#8217;re going to come out of it feeling utterly <strong>mindf**ked</strong>.</p>
<p>Or maybe that’s just <strong>the idea </strong>that Nolan will plant in your mind&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>Guest Blog: Surviving Hollywood</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here&#8217;s an excellent guest blog on John August&#8216;s site; it&#8217;s written by George Sloan, a writer&#8217;s assistant on How I Met Your Mother. It&#8217;s an insightful and witty piece on how to not only break into Hollywood but how to survive. Here&#8217;s Sloan picture-perfect description of the industry: &#8220;I think of Hollywood as a giant, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s an excellent guest blog on <a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/moving-to-hollywoo" target="_blank"><strong>John August</strong>&#8216;s site</a>; it&#8217;s written by <strong>George Sloan</strong>, a writer&#8217;s assistant on <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0460649/" target="_blank"><em>How I Met Your Mother</em></a>. It&#8217;s an insightful and witty piece on how to not only break into Hollywood but how to survive.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s Sloan picture-perfect description of the industry:</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;I think of Hollywood as a giant, freezing-cold, bacteria-ridden whirlpool. On the outside of the whirlpool, closest to the shore (and financial security), are the executives, the studio heads, the big-name actors, writers and directors. As you move towards the center, you come upon the lower-level employees. And moving further inwards still, you come to the PA’s. There’s thousands of them, all clamoring and clawing, trying desperately not to get sucked into the deep, dark hole of anonymity and sadness.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>Check out the <a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2010/moving-to-hollywoo" target="_blank">full blog here</a>.</p>
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		<title>The Hurt Locker Explodes With Oscar Win</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Hurt Locker wins the Best Original Screenplay Oscar, along with Best Picture, Best Director and three other naked statuettes. Wow. I&#8217;m both thrilled for the filmmakers and kinda stunned at the same time. I love the fact that this &#8220;little movie that could&#8221; has, in fact, &#8220;did.&#8221; But is it really better than other [...]]]></description>
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<strong><em><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank">The Hurt Locker</a> </em></strong>wins the <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=70NyOMS1HPU" target="_blank"><strong>Best Original Screenplay Oscar</strong></a>, along with <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UBpRdmCp6Io" target="_blank"><strong>Best Picture</strong>, <strong>Best Director</strong> and three other naked statuettes</a>.</p>
<p>Wow.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m both thrilled for the filmmakers and kinda stunned at the same time. I love the fact that this &#8220;little movie that could&#8221; has, in fact, &#8220;did.&#8221; But is it really better than other great nominees out there?</p>
<p>From a screenwriting point of view, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1676793/" target="_blank">Mark Boal</a>&#8216;s script is an extremely taunt dramatic thriller, a fresh take on an established subgenre of war movies. It has extremely real characters, fantastic dialogue, and a real sense of immediacy. (It helps that Mark drew from his experiences as a journalist embedded with a real Iraq War bomb squad unit.) But, <a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/1125">as I wrote previously</a>, I was left wanting a stronger character arc (as the hero doesn&#8217;t learn anything by the end of the flick) and a bigger conflict.</p>
<p>From a directing stand point, I&#8217;m thrilled for <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000941/" target="_blank">Kathryn Bigelow</a>, the <strong>first woman director to win the Oscar</strong>. She&#8217;s been around a while and is extremely talented. She pulled the strings at just the right moments to up the tension then pulled back . But is her work a bigger accomplishment than what he ex-husband James Cameron did with <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0499549/" target="_blank"><em>Avatar</em></a>, a gargantuan movie that not only destroyed the box office but has redefined the very essence of 3-D movies and what can be done mixing live action, performance caption, and CGI? No doubt <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0499549/" target="_blank"><em>Avatar </em></a>was a logistical nightmare from which he draw an amazingly thriller crowd-pleaser.</p>
<p>But should anyone really be that surprised the <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0499549/" target="_blank"><em>Avatar</em> </a>didn&#8217;t win any of the major awards? It is, after all, just an &#8220;sci-fi&#8221; flick, a genre that is looked down upon by the Academy. No genre film has ever won Best Picture.</p>
<p>Ultimately, though, any time a small indie like <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank"><em>The Hurt Locker</em></a> wins, it&#8217;s a good thing for filmmakers and screenwriters like me, guys on the out edges of Hollywood trying to bust into the inner circle.</p>
<p>Congrats, Mark and Kathryn!</p>
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		<title>Adding The Hurt Locker: A Review</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[In my typical revisionistic fashion, I’ve rewritten my list of “Best Produced Screenplays of 2009” after finally watching The Hurt Locker. My Top 8 now becomes a Top 9. I didn’t bump anybody off the list because they’re all stellar work. But at the same time, I didn’t put Kathryn Bigelow’s intense drama (about a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In <a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/627" target="_blank">my typical revisionistic fashion</a>, I’ve rewritten my list of “<a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/1118" target="_blank">Best Produced Screenplays of 2009</a>” after finally watching <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank"><strong><em>The Hurt Locker</em></strong></a>.</p>
<p>My Top 8 now becomes a Top 9. I didn’t bump anybody off the list because they’re all stellar work. But at the same time, I didn’t put <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000941/" target="_blank">Kathryn Bigelow</a>’s intense drama (about a U.S. Army bomb squad unit) in the Top 5.</p>
<p>Why? It just didn’t blow me away (pun totally intended). Don’t get me wrong: I thought it was quite powerful. And critics lavished it with all sorts of honors (i.e. Writers Guild Award for Best Original Screenplay), but I felt the screenplay didn’t provide much an arc for the main character, Staff Sgt. William James, played by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0719637/" target="_blank">Jeremy Renner</a>. He starts off as a cocky cowboy-in-fatigues figure and &#8212; save for a subplot about him befriending a locale Iraqi boy &#8212; he pretty much ends the movie in exactly the same fashion.</p>
<p>Almost no change. Nothing learned. Zero character development.</p>
<p>In my book, that’s not Top 5 screenwriting material. But still, the script by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1676793/" target="_blank"><strong>Mark Boal</strong></a> offers plenty of good things: a strong supporting cast, an exotic setting, a timely subject, and an intrinsically butt-clenching premise (a gung-ho bomb specialist takes over an Explosive Ordinance Disposal squad and clashes with his by-the-book subordinates in the midst of roadside bombs, insurgent snipers, and unrelentingly harsh Iraqi environment.</p>
<p>Some of the praise should go to Bigelow, who does an amazing job of capitalizing on the hair-raising tension and mind-numbing lulls (much like real-life military life) with her mix of documentary style camerawork and slow-mo visuals.</p>
<p>But then again, that’s why both <a href="http://oscar.go.com/nominations/nominees" target="_blank">Bigelow and Boal received Oscar nominations</a> in their respective categories, eh?</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK, so<a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/627" target="_blank"> yet again</a> I&#8217;ve <a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/1027" target="_blank">rewritten my Best-Of list</a>. This time, it&#8217;s because I finally saw <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank"><em>The Hurt Locker</em></a>. Here&#8217;s how it ranks up against my other favorites of last year:</p>
<blockquote><p><strong>1. <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1049413/" target="_blank"><em>Up</em></a></strong><em><br />
</em><strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0677037/" target="_blank">Bob Peterson</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0230032/" target="_blank">Pete Docter</a></strong><br />
The first three on my list are all running neck and neck and neck for the top spot, but ultimately, I had to give it to <em>Up</em>, this funny, emotional, unpredictable, and technically brilliant animated film from (where else?) Pixar Studios. It has everything a near-perfect screenplay should have: real (and really flawed) characters, realistic (yet witty) dialogue, strong (and strongly motivated) villains, and a believable character arc (there&#8217;s two actually, one for each of the main characters). Who knew a cartoon about a senior citizen and a chubby kid in a balloon-powered floating house would be so riveting?</p>
<p><strong>2. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1136608/" target="_blank"><em><strong>District 9</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0088955/" target="_blank">Neill Blomkamp</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2833612/" target="_blank">Terri Tatchell</a></strong><br />
&#8220;Wow.&#8221; That was my first impression after seeing this movie. Smart on so many levels and wholly different from anything Hollywood could ever hope to produce, <em>District 9</em> is a ticking time-bomb of a story: it starts off like a real-life documentary about alien refugees, sprints off like an action movie on fire, and ends with one cataclysmic sci-fi bang that leaves you blown away.</p>
<p><strong>3. <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0499549/" target="_blank"><em>Avatar</em></a></strong><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000116/" target="_blank">James Cameron</a></strong><br />
James Cameron&#8217;s screenplay for this year&#8217;s most anticipated film and history&#8217;s most expensive movie ever is by no means subtle. But it does exactly what a good script should do: act as the solid blueprint for an amazingly sound yet beautiful cinematic monolith to be built upon. From paying off small first-act setups to putting a 22nd-Century twist on cliched elements, the <em>Avatar </em>story is breathtaking, intense, and otherworldly &#8212; it reminds us of the very reasons we go to the cinema in the first place.</p>
<p><strong>4. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0796366/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Star Trek</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0649460/" target="_blank">Roberto Orci</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0476064/" target="_blank">Alex Kurtzman</a></strong><br />
Director J.J. Abrams is a pop-culture God. Just look at his <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0009190/" target="_blank">recent credits</a>. And his re-imagining of the<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Trek_The_Original_Series" target="_blank"> original <em>Star Trek </em>series</a> was a pretty damn good balance between appeasing the Trekkers and Trekkies (depending on your level of geekdom) and telling a suspenseful, witty, and action-packed sci-fi opera for the newbies. But it&#8217;s really the screenwriting duo of Orci &amp; Kurtzman who should share in the glory. Though their screenplay has a few flaws (<strong>[spoiler until the end of the parenthesis]</strong> why the Hell does Kirk go from ensign to captain of the Enterprise in less than a day???), its solid structure is what allowed Abrams to pull off the sacrilegious move of remaking a classic.</p>
<p><strong>5. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0361748/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Inglourious Basterds </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000233/" target="_blank">Quentin Tarantino</a></strong><br />
This historical fantasy made a big splash because it was Quentin Tarantino&#8217;s return to form, his entree back into pop-culture consciousness after the dismal performance of his half of <em><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0462322/" target="_blank">Grindhouse</a></em>, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1028528/" target="_blank"><em>Death Proof</em></a>. Unique anti-heroes (a band of covert U.S. Army Jews infiltrating Nazi-occupied France), long-winded monologues, and the most delicious villain we&#8217;ve seen in a long time. Sure some of his scenes needed to be trimmed (the pub scene was way too long!) and the alternate-history ending didn&#8217;t sit well with me, but overall, <em>Inglourious Basterds</em> was one of the most unique screenplays of the year and one of the most enjoyable movies.</p>
<p><strong>6. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0936501/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Taken </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000108/" target="_blank">Luc Besson</a> and <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0436543/" target="_blank">Robert Mark Kamen</a></strong><br />
A stellar example of how a script with a simple premise -– Liam Neeson plays an ex-CIA agent who must find his daughter&#8217;s kidnappers in France -— can result in a tight, suspenseful thriller so long as the execution is done right.</p>
<p><strong>7. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1119646/" target="_blank"><em><strong>The Hangover </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0524190/" target="_blank">Jon Lucas</a> and <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0601859/" target="_blank">Scott Moore</a> </strong><br />
There was no single funnier movie in 2009 than <em>The Hangover</em>. Lucas and Moore take the tired “bachelor party in Vegas” subgenre, put a subtle <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0209144/" target="_blank"><em>Memento</em></a>-like slant on it, and deliver one of the most jaw-droppingly, surprisingly hilarious films of the year.</p>
<p><strong>8. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank"><em><strong>The Hurt Locker</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1676793/" target="_blank">Mark Boal</a></strong><br />
This is an intense war thriller about a gung-ho bomb specialist who takes over a U.S. Army Explosive Ordinance Disposal squad and clashes with his by-the-book subordinates in the midst of roadside bombs, insurgent snipers, and internal demons. Not perfect and lacks a strong character arc, but otherwise pretty invigorating. Makes me glad I never joined the military &#8212; and grateful to those who have.</p>
<p><strong><span style="text-decoration: line-through;">8.</span> 9. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0878804/" target="_blank"><em><strong>The Blind Side</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0359387/" target="_blank">John Lee Hancock</a></strong><br />
I usually don&#8217;t fall for the based-on-a-true-story, tear-jerking, feel-good dramas, but this Sandra Bullock-starring football movie took me by surprise. Why? Because the screenplay had well-rounded characters and a simple but effective plotline &#8212; all causing you to empathize with the main character. An effective family-friendly drama if ever there were one this year.</p>
<p><strong>Honorable Mentions:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1179904/" target="_blank"><em>Paranormal Activity</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1155056/" target="_blank"><em>I Love You, Man</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0409459/" target="_blank"><em>Watchmen</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0963178/" target="_blank"><em>The International</em></a></li>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Check out this cool little ditty: a trailer for an CG-animation zombie movie.<br />
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It&#8217;s called <strong><em>A.D.</em></strong> and is directed by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2446483/" target="_blank">Ben Hibon</a>, written by <a href="http://us.imdb.com/name/nm1815707/" target="_blank">Haylar Garcia</a>, and produced by <a href="http://us.imdb.com/name/nm0325927/" target="_blank">Bernie Goldmann</a> (<a href="http://us.imdb.com/title/tt0416449/" target="_blank"><em>300</em></a>), <a href="http://us.imdb.com/name/nm0374756/" target="_blank">Tarik Heitmann</a> (<a href="http://us.imdb.com/title/tt0454941/" target="_blank"><em>The Sensei</em></a>), and Renee Tab. Looks pretty cool. I like the idea of taking the zombie genre into the digital realm &#8212; worlds of possibilities, I say, not just for animators, but for writers, too.<br />
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		<title>Best Produced Screenplays of 2009</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Another year, another arbitrary &#8220;Best Of&#8221; list. But this isn&#8217;t just any arbitrary &#8220;Best Of&#8221; list. This is my arbitrary Top 8 list. Why Top 8, why not Top 5 or Top 10? Why not. Plus, I did a Top 4 last year. So, enjoy! It&#8217;s kinda hard to judge a screenplay by watching the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another year, another arbitrary &#8220;Best Of&#8221; list. But this isn&#8217;t just any arbitrary &#8220;Best Of&#8221; list. This is my arbitrary Top 8 list. Why Top 8, why not Top 5 or Top 10? Why not. Plus, I did a <a href="http://patrickvuong.com/archives/566" target="_blank">Top 4 last year</a>. So, enjoy!</p>
<p>It&#8217;s kinda hard to judge a screenplay by watching the resultant film without reading the actual screenplay. But I&#8217;ll do my best here to strip away the director&#8217;s gorgeous choices, the actors&#8217; brilliant human touches, and the rest of the crew&#8217;s awesome work, so I can focus on the movie&#8217;s spine: the script. <span style="color: #008000;">(Keep in mind I have <span style="text-decoration: underline;">not</span> yet seen the usual late-in-the-year Oscar bait, such as <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0929632/" target="_blank"><em>Precious</em></a>, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1193138/" target="_blank"><em>Up in the Air</em></a>, or <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0875034/" target="_blank"><em>Nine</em></a>, or highly praised smaller movies, like <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0887912/" target="_blank"><em>The Hurt Locker</em></a>.)</span></p>
<p>Below is my list of 2009&#8242;s Best Produced Screenplays:</p>
<p><strong>1. <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1049413/" target="_blank"><em>Up</em></a></strong><em><br />
</em><strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0677037/" target="_blank">Bob Peterson</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0230032/" target="_blank">Pete Docter</a></strong><br />
The first three on my list are all running neck and neck and neck for the top spot, but ultimately, I had to give it to <em>Up</em>, this funny, emotional, unpredictable, and technically brilliant animated film from (where else?) Pixar Studios. It has everything a near-perfect screenplay should have: real (and really flawed) characters, realistic (yet witty) dialogue, strong (and strongly motivated) villains, and a believable character arc (there&#8217;s two actually, one for each of the main characters). Who knew a cartoon about a senior citizen and a chubby kid in a balloon-powered floating house would be so riveting?</p>
<p><strong>2. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1136608/" target="_blank"><em><strong>District 9</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0088955/" target="_blank">Neill Blomkamp</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm2833612/" target="_blank">Terri Tatchell</a></strong><br />
&#8220;Wow.&#8221; That was my first impression after seeing this movie. Smart on so many levels and wholly different from anything Hollywood could ever hope to produce, <em>District 9</em> is a ticking time-bomb of a story: it starts off like a real-life documentary about alien refugees, sprints off like an action movie on fire, and ends with one cataclysmic sci-fi bang that leaves you blown away.</p>
<p><strong>3. <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0499549/" target="_blank"><em>Avatar</em></a></strong><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000116/" target="_blank">James Cameron</a></strong><br />
James Cameron&#8217;s screenplay for this year&#8217;s most anticipated film and history&#8217;s most expensive movie ever is by no means subtle. But it does exactly what a good script should do: act as the solid blueprint for an amazingly sound yet beautiful cinematic monolith to be built upon. From paying off small first-act setups to putting a 22nd-Century twist on cliched elements, the <em>Avatar </em>story is breathtaking, intense, and otherworldly &#8212; it reminds us of the very reasons we go to the cinema in the first place.</p>
<p><strong>4. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0796366/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Star Trek</strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0649460/" target="_blank">Roberto Orci</a> &amp; <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0476064/" target="_blank">Alex Kurtzman</a></strong><br />
Director J.J. Abrams is a pop-culture God. Just look at his <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0009190/" target="_blank">recent credits</a>. And his re-imagining of the<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Trek_The_Original_Series" target="_blank"> original <em>Star Trek </em>series</a> was a pretty damn good balance between appeasing the Trekkers and Trekkies (depending on your level of geekdom) and telling a suspenseful, witty, and action-packed sci-fi opera for the newbies. But it&#8217;s really the screenwriting duo of Orci &amp; Kurtzman who should share in the glory. Though their screenplay has a few flaws (<strong>[spoiler until the end of the parenthesis]</strong> why the Hell does Kirk go from ensign to captain of the Enterprise in less than a day???), its solid structure is what allowed Abrams to pull off the sacrilegious move of remaking a classic.</p>
<p><strong>5. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0361748/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Inglourious Basterds </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000233/" target="_blank">Quentin Tarantino</a></strong><br />
This historical fantasy made a big splash because it was Quentin Tarantino&#8217;s return to form, his entree back into pop-culture consciousness after the dismal performance of his half of <em><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0462322/" target="_blank">Grindhouse</a></em>, <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1028528/" target="_blank"><em>Death Proof</em></a>. Unique anti-heroes (a band of covert U.S. Army Jews infiltrating Nazi-occupied France), long-winded monologues, and the most delicious villain we&#8217;ve seen in a long time. Sure some of his scenes needed to be trimmed (the pub scene was way too long!) and the alternate-history ending didn&#8217;t sit well with me, but overall, <em>Inglourious Basterds</em> was one of the most unique screenplays of the year and one of the most enjoyable movies.</p>
<p><strong>6. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0936501/" target="_blank"><em><strong>Taken </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000108/" target="_blank">Luc Besson</a> and <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0436543/" target="_blank">Robert Mark Kamen</a></strong><br />
A stellar example of how a script with a simple premise -– Liam Neeson plays an ex-CIA agent who must find his daughter&#8217;s kidnappers in France -— can result in a tight, suspenseful thriller so long as the execution is done right.</p>
<p><strong>7. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1119646/" target="_blank"><em><strong>The Hangover </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0524190/" target="_blank">Jon Lucas</a> and <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0601859/" target="_blank">Scott Moore</a> </strong><br />
There was no single funnier movie in 2009 than <em>The Hangover</em>. Lucas and Moore take the tired “bachelor party in Vegas” subgenre, put a subtle <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0209144/" target="_blank"><em>Memento</em></a>-like slant on it, and deliver one of the most jaw-droppingly, surprisingly hilarious films of the year.</p>
<p><strong>8. </strong><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0878804/" target="_blank"><em><strong>The Blind Side </strong></em></a><br />
<strong>Written by <a href="http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0359387/" target="_blank">John Lee Hancock</a></strong><br />
I usually don&#8217;t fall for the based-on-a-true-story, tear-jerking, feel-good dramas, but this Sandra Bullock-starring football movie took me by surprise. Why? Because the screenplay had well-rounded characters and a simple but effective plotline &#8212; all causing you to empathize with the main character. An effective family-friendly drama if ever there were one this year.</p>
<p><strong>Honorable Mentions:</strong></p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1179904/" target="_blank"><em>Paranormal Activity</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1155056/" target="_blank"><em>I Love You, Man</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0409459/" target="_blank"><em>Watchmen</em></a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0963178/" target="_blank"><em>The International</em></a></li>
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